Did Yoooooooou Ever?
Friday, May 23, 2008
Tuesday, May 20, 2008
Did You Ever
Analysis
"Ring ring ring ring," my alarm clock was going off louder then usual. I hit the snooze button but it didn't seem to be turning off. Finally, I got so fed up and I threw my alarm clock against the wall, hoping that it was just stop making noise. It was only 6:30 a.m. and school starts at 8:00 sharp. I'm glad I'm not in elementary school anymore because I would have to get up even earlier then that. So I stood up out of bed and went straight to the bathroom to get ready. I looked myself in the mirror and thought how much I hate school, but I knew that I had to be at the bus stop by 7:15. If I wasn't there by then, my day would just start off horrible. I rushed downstairs at 6:45 to eat breakfast and jumped on the couch to turn on the T.V. I missed my T.V. series that I always watch because I had to do stupid homework, but now that it's on, I was planning on watching it. It was commercial, and I looked at the time. Oh no, it was 7:12. I lost track of time so I grabbed my books and ran out the door. I sprinted as fast as I could because I had to be there by then. The bus actually didn't come until 7:25, but I liked being early. I just turned the corner and there she was. She was getting into her car with her friends on her way to school. Boy did she look fine as ever. Her hair would just glisten in the sun and her smile makes me melt. The only reason why I go early to the bus stop was to see Eva, the apple of my eye, the girl that makes my heart drop ever time I see her, the girl that I'm in love with. She lives right by the bus stop, so close that I could see her every morning greet her friends, get into her car and then go to school. I could just stare at her forever, wishing that she even knew my name, but she didn't. I just, wanted to get to know her; I wanted her to get to know me. I really think that I'm in love with her, the most beautiful girl I've ever laid my eyes on.
Watching her car drive off to school, I heard a big vehicle stop in front of me while sitting at the bus stop. Looking up, it was my mom, "hope in son, i'll give you a ride. I'm heading that way anyways," she said with a big smile on her face. I gave her a fake smile and opened the door; off to school we were. We finally got to school, about ten minutes later, and I kissed my mom and said bye.
I opened the doors to Winterfield High School; boy was this high school getting old. I was walking to my locker as my best friend, Kirstie jumped up to me with a big smile on her face. "Hey, how come you didn't return my calls from this weekend?" she questioned. "Ummm, I was a little busy family camping and stuff," I replied in a hurry. I tuned to talk to Kirstie, but then I saw Eva. I stood there, paralyzed by her beauty, thinking about how her life would be so much better with me in it. Kirstie was just staring back at me, with disgust. "I don't even know what you see in her, she's just a pretty face and fun to look at," she said, giving Eva a dirty stare. I could see it in Kirstie, she didn't like Eva at all. She always had something negative to say about her, but I didn't listen at all. Nothing could change my feelings about her, because she was absolutely perfect for me. I've never really looked at Kirstie then more than a friend, I mean, I've known her since I was a little boy. We go way back to the diaper days, but we're just best friends. I've heard rumos about how people thought that we were together, as in more than friends, and I think that's what she wants, but I don't think that I could do that. My heart truly lies in the hands of Eva.
People don't understand Eva, but I do. She's a beautiful person, on the inside and out. No one really can see it because she's gorgeous. Every time I see her, she takes my breath away. People don't really look at her like she's anything, because she's popular. I think that people only want her for one thing, and that's not for her personality, but that's why I'm so in love with her. Eva was in one of my classes when I was in 8th grade, and she was the smartest girl in our class. She sat by me in class and we had to do a paper on the book The Catcher in the Rye. It was a good book and we had to write a book report on it. Eva was a very fast reader and finished the book in less then a day. She already started on the book report before I ever opened the book.
I thought she was the smartest person that I knew in my whole entire life, and knew that she was everything that I wanted in a girl. Smart, beautiful, funny, and she even smelt good. Now that we are in High School, she is in all Honors classes and she a varsity cheerleader. She was going out with the Varsity Quarterback and I knew that I had no chance against him. I wouldn't get anywhere with her, and I wish that she would just, know how much I was in love with her for her and knew how much I cared for her. I wish that she would know that I would give her the world, and that I could give her the best, and only the best. I wish she knew that I would do absolutely nothing to hurt her and that she's the only thing that I think about. But I knew that wouldn't be happening soon, so I just stood on the side, thinking about what I would do if I knew she was mine, instead of being just a secret admirer. So I closed my locker with a smile, thinking about how perfect she is, knowing that I will always love Eva Miller, the love of my life since the 8th grade.
Did you Ever
By: Preciousz Savusa
I remember the first time i saw you on the block you were with your girls and you were looking kinda hot, so sexy when you pass me by it was love at first site girl i can't deny. Had to have you in my life, knowing you're the one that makes things right being the woman who was meant for me, did you ever think that this could be? A love intensify by one lease, emotions so strong it will not cease, mesmerized by your style, your pretty face girl i love your smile did you ever wonder how far we could go? I'll show you a passion only we could know.
Did you ever fall in love and know they didn't care
Did you ever feel like trying and know you would get nowhere
Did you ever look into their eyes and say a little prayer
Did you ever look into her heart and wish that your heart was there.
Did you ever?
Do you remember all them times i tried to getcha, i thought you was acting funny cuz you girls was witcha so i wasn't trippin, i just held back and chill waitin for the chance so i could tell ya how i feel baby i'm foreal, sometimes i sit and think about how i could have ya picture you walking by and have the courage to grab ya, to the side, telling you how what i feel till i open my eyes and realize it's all in my mind, damn, it's just a vision that i had but when i think about the time i tried to holla at ya, ya just laughed, but i ain't i mad, you got your reasons, you listen to other people but really you ain't gotta believe them. Don't be judging books by the cover if you ain't read the page cuz i show ya a love you never knew in so many ways, my mama told me if you love something let it go but if you even think about what i said you already know.
Did you ever fall in love and know they didn't care
Did you ever feel like trying and know you would get nowhere
Did you ever look into their eyes and say a little prayer
Did you ever look into her heart and wish that your heart was there.
Did you ever?
Girl i know you don't know me, i really don't know you and just a couple of things i really wanna do and it ain't gotta be sex, so we don't have to screw yes, it can be straight intellect conversation so cool, but i know you don't wanna go that route, you been hurt so many times you just cry out ouch, no doubt, i'm tryna change the game, putchu in a situation where you just wanna change your name, whos to blame for all this pain that we suffer, i climb through the rain, our love just get tougher, we don't need no? And we don't need no buffer, but i thank that God's hands and just trust each other be my lover and my friend and i tell you again, you will never have to worry i'll be down till the end, i commend you on everything that you do, let me show you that i'm real and that my love is true.
Did you ever fall in love and know they didn't care
Did you ever feel like trying and know you would get nowhere
Did you ever look into their eyes and say a little prayer
Did you ever look; into her heart and wish that your heart was there.
Did you ever?
Did you ever did you did you ever girl?
Did you ever did you did you ever girl?
Did you ever did you did you ever girl?
Cause' I love you.
* The reason that i choose to this song and to write the lyrics how i did was because i thought it would be different if i wrote from a guy's point of view. I know how it is when girls miss guys or wish that they would notice it, but i didn't realize it happens for both sex. I thought that it was would be a new experience for me to do that and now i know that guys have feelings and that they have minds of their own. My song is about true love and about true feelings. This song gives me another perspective on guys and how all guys have sensitive sides to them and how that girls should realize that too(:
"Ring ring ring ring," my alarm clock was going off louder then usual. I hit the snooze button but it didn't seem to be turning off. Finally, I got so fed up and I threw my alarm clock against the wall, hoping that it was just stop making noise. It was only 6:30 a.m. and school starts at 8:00 sharp. I'm glad I'm not in elementary school anymore because I would have to get up even earlier then that. So I stood up out of bed and went straight to the bathroom to get ready. I looked myself in the mirror and thought how much I hate school, but I knew that I had to be at the bus stop by 7:15. If I wasn't there by then, my day would just start off horrible. I rushed downstairs at 6:45 to eat breakfast and jumped on the couch to turn on the T.V. I missed my T.V. series that I always watch because I had to do stupid homework, but now that it's on, I was planning on watching it. It was commercial, and I looked at the time. Oh no, it was 7:12. I lost track of time so I grabbed my books and ran out the door. I sprinted as fast as I could because I had to be there by then. The bus actually didn't come until 7:25, but I liked being early. I just turned the corner and there she was. She was getting into her car with her friends on her way to school. Boy did she look fine as ever. Her hair would just glisten in the sun and her smile makes me melt. The only reason why I go early to the bus stop was to see Eva, the apple of my eye, the girl that makes my heart drop ever time I see her, the girl that I'm in love with. She lives right by the bus stop, so close that I could see her every morning greet her friends, get into her car and then go to school. I could just stare at her forever, wishing that she even knew my name, but she didn't. I just, wanted to get to know her; I wanted her to get to know me. I really think that I'm in love with her, the most beautiful girl I've ever laid my eyes on.
Watching her car drive off to school, I heard a big vehicle stop in front of me while sitting at the bus stop. Looking up, it was my mom, "hope in son, i'll give you a ride. I'm heading that way anyways," she said with a big smile on her face. I gave her a fake smile and opened the door; off to school we were. We finally got to school, about ten minutes later, and I kissed my mom and said bye.
I opened the doors to Winterfield High School; boy was this high school getting old. I was walking to my locker as my best friend, Kirstie jumped up to me with a big smile on her face. "Hey, how come you didn't return my calls from this weekend?" she questioned. "Ummm, I was a little busy family camping and stuff," I replied in a hurry. I tuned to talk to Kirstie, but then I saw Eva. I stood there, paralyzed by her beauty, thinking about how her life would be so much better with me in it. Kirstie was just staring back at me, with disgust. "I don't even know what you see in her, she's just a pretty face and fun to look at," she said, giving Eva a dirty stare. I could see it in Kirstie, she didn't like Eva at all. She always had something negative to say about her, but I didn't listen at all. Nothing could change my feelings about her, because she was absolutely perfect for me. I've never really looked at Kirstie then more than a friend, I mean, I've known her since I was a little boy. We go way back to the diaper days, but we're just best friends. I've heard rumos about how people thought that we were together, as in more than friends, and I think that's what she wants, but I don't think that I could do that. My heart truly lies in the hands of Eva.
People don't understand Eva, but I do. She's a beautiful person, on the inside and out. No one really can see it because she's gorgeous. Every time I see her, she takes my breath away. People don't really look at her like she's anything, because she's popular. I think that people only want her for one thing, and that's not for her personality, but that's why I'm so in love with her. Eva was in one of my classes when I was in 8th grade, and she was the smartest girl in our class. She sat by me in class and we had to do a paper on the book The Catcher in the Rye. It was a good book and we had to write a book report on it. Eva was a very fast reader and finished the book in less then a day. She already started on the book report before I ever opened the book.
I thought she was the smartest person that I knew in my whole entire life, and knew that she was everything that I wanted in a girl. Smart, beautiful, funny, and she even smelt good. Now that we are in High School, she is in all Honors classes and she a varsity cheerleader. She was going out with the Varsity Quarterback and I knew that I had no chance against him. I wouldn't get anywhere with her, and I wish that she would just, know how much I was in love with her for her and knew how much I cared for her. I wish that she would know that I would give her the world, and that I could give her the best, and only the best. I wish she knew that I would do absolutely nothing to hurt her and that she's the only thing that I think about. But I knew that wouldn't be happening soon, so I just stood on the side, thinking about what I would do if I knew she was mine, instead of being just a secret admirer. So I closed my locker with a smile, thinking about how perfect she is, knowing that I will always love Eva Miller, the love of my life since the 8th grade.
Did you Ever
By: Preciousz Savusa
I remember the first time i saw you on the block you were with your girls and you were looking kinda hot, so sexy when you pass me by it was love at first site girl i can't deny. Had to have you in my life, knowing you're the one that makes things right being the woman who was meant for me, did you ever think that this could be? A love intensify by one lease, emotions so strong it will not cease, mesmerized by your style, your pretty face girl i love your smile did you ever wonder how far we could go? I'll show you a passion only we could know.
Did you ever fall in love and know they didn't care
Did you ever feel like trying and know you would get nowhere
Did you ever look into their eyes and say a little prayer
Did you ever look into her heart and wish that your heart was there.
Did you ever?
Do you remember all them times i tried to getcha, i thought you was acting funny cuz you girls was witcha so i wasn't trippin, i just held back and chill waitin for the chance so i could tell ya how i feel baby i'm foreal, sometimes i sit and think about how i could have ya picture you walking by and have the courage to grab ya, to the side, telling you how what i feel till i open my eyes and realize it's all in my mind, damn, it's just a vision that i had but when i think about the time i tried to holla at ya, ya just laughed, but i ain't i mad, you got your reasons, you listen to other people but really you ain't gotta believe them. Don't be judging books by the cover if you ain't read the page cuz i show ya a love you never knew in so many ways, my mama told me if you love something let it go but if you even think about what i said you already know.
Did you ever fall in love and know they didn't care
Did you ever feel like trying and know you would get nowhere
Did you ever look into their eyes and say a little prayer
Did you ever look into her heart and wish that your heart was there.
Did you ever?
Girl i know you don't know me, i really don't know you and just a couple of things i really wanna do and it ain't gotta be sex, so we don't have to screw yes, it can be straight intellect conversation so cool, but i know you don't wanna go that route, you been hurt so many times you just cry out ouch, no doubt, i'm tryna change the game, putchu in a situation where you just wanna change your name, whos to blame for all this pain that we suffer, i climb through the rain, our love just get tougher, we don't need no? And we don't need no buffer, but i thank that God's hands and just trust each other be my lover and my friend and i tell you again, you will never have to worry i'll be down till the end, i commend you on everything that you do, let me show you that i'm real and that my love is true.
Did you ever fall in love and know they didn't care
Did you ever feel like trying and know you would get nowhere
Did you ever look into their eyes and say a little prayer
Did you ever look; into her heart and wish that your heart was there.
Did you ever?
Did you ever did you did you ever girl?
Did you ever did you did you ever girl?
Did you ever did you did you ever girl?
Cause' I love you.
* The reason that i choose to this song and to write the lyrics how i did was because i thought it would be different if i wrote from a guy's point of view. I know how it is when girls miss guys or wish that they would notice it, but i didn't realize it happens for both sex. I thought that it was would be a new experience for me to do that and now i know that guys have feelings and that they have minds of their own. My song is about true love and about true feelings. This song gives me another perspective on guys and how all guys have sensitive sides to them and how that girls should realize that too(:
Tuesday, April 22, 2008
Wednesday, April 9, 2008
sonnet(:
I love you from the bottom of my heart,
I'm so glad to know that you are all mine.
Praying that we will never be apart,
You respect me, never crossing the line.
You're always on my thoughts and my mind,
Through all my troubles you understand.
We are true love that lots of people can't find,
You don't judge me, but there to hold my hand.
When i see you, my heart begins to race,
When you love someone so deep down inside.
You always put a smile on my face,
It seems like there's nothing you could hide.
Hoping you'll never walk out of my life,
Waiting for the day you call me your wife.
Analysis
First of all, my topic that I chose to do my sonnet on was love. Love is a very strong word that is an intense feeling of tender affection and compassion for one another. I know that love is a very common thing to write about in poems or sonnets because that is a way to express your feelings or your thoughts, but I still chose to write about it. The reason I wrote about love was because I think that anyone who reads my sonnet can somehow relate to it. Even if people don't have significant others to spend their life with, they still have people in their lives who love them, whether it's their parents or their friends or family. Everyone at some point in their lives know that they love someone and know that that feelings they have is indescribable, that no one could ever replace them ever, and they know that they are going to love them for the rest of their lives. It doesn't matter how old you are to be able to get that feeling, because it can start at any age in life.
Sometimes when people lose their loved ones such as family members, of course, they are going to get sad and they are going to feel emptiness in their hearts. Sometimes people can't cope with the fact that they are gone and they usually need help to get over it. Most of the time, people need someone to talk to and even sometimes people feel that they need someone to fill that spot in their hearts and that is usually where people need the feeling of love from someone, such as a boyfriend or girlfriend. A lot of people are just the type of person to just want to be with someone for the wrong reasons, such as a physical relationship or they just want to be with someone for a short period of time. From that, you know that it isn't really love, but just lust. People feel that in their lives, they need someone to actually be called theirs, or someone to just feel safe with and talk to, but since they want it so bad, they look for someone for the wrong reasons.
In my life, I have a lot of people that love me and I have people who are physically and mentally there for me. I don't know what I would do without the people. Personally, when I was in Kindergarten, I started to have little crushes on the opposite sex. I knew that I would start to like boys because I was very attracted to them and they just stood out to me. Once I got older and matured, I still felt the same way with boys except I started to get involved with them. I learned that feelings and emotions are very much real and if you love someone truly and deeply, that you will never want to let them go, and that they are your everything. You feel such a great feeling that you cannot describe in words. There is just not a perfect way to describe the feeling of being loved. I think that love is such a beautiful thing that no one should take advantage of. When people say I love you, it is such a moving thing to hear filled with such mixed motions.
The first time someone told me that they loved me, I was petrified of it but I was so happy and I just, I was lost of words. I wasn't able to think, I didn't know what to do and I didn't know what I felt, I was so confused and astonished. I was so afraid when he told me he loved me because I wasn't sure that he really loved me and I just wasn't sure if I was ready to be loved. I was afraid of the commitment that I would have to make and I was afraid that I was getting in too deep. I thought that if I didn't say I loved him that he would just go away, like how I wanted him to, but he still didn't. He stuck with me for as long as I needed him to, and he never left my side. After everything, I knew exactly how I felt and I told him that I loved him too and I knew that I really did mean it. After I told him I loved him, I knew that this love was so true. People say that it is better to not be in a relationship with someone, but other times, I don't think so. I feel that having someone that is always there for you is something great. Whenever I feel down, he is the only person I think of, the only person I want to be able to talk to, the only person who can actually help me. I know that he will just be there to be able to listen to me, and not judge for my actions, but just love me for me. Some people just don't know how lucky they are to have someone to love them, because some people in the world don't know what it feels to be loved, they don't know how to or what to love. It's not just something you can say, but something you can feel. Love is genuinely precious, and no one and nothing can tell you differently if you know you love someone.
I'm so glad to know that you are all mine.
Praying that we will never be apart,
You respect me, never crossing the line.
You're always on my thoughts and my mind,
Through all my troubles you understand.
We are true love that lots of people can't find,
You don't judge me, but there to hold my hand.
When i see you, my heart begins to race,
When you love someone so deep down inside.
You always put a smile on my face,
It seems like there's nothing you could hide.
Hoping you'll never walk out of my life,
Waiting for the day you call me your wife.
Analysis
First of all, my topic that I chose to do my sonnet on was love. Love is a very strong word that is an intense feeling of tender affection and compassion for one another. I know that love is a very common thing to write about in poems or sonnets because that is a way to express your feelings or your thoughts, but I still chose to write about it. The reason I wrote about love was because I think that anyone who reads my sonnet can somehow relate to it. Even if people don't have significant others to spend their life with, they still have people in their lives who love them, whether it's their parents or their friends or family. Everyone at some point in their lives know that they love someone and know that that feelings they have is indescribable, that no one could ever replace them ever, and they know that they are going to love them for the rest of their lives. It doesn't matter how old you are to be able to get that feeling, because it can start at any age in life.
Sometimes when people lose their loved ones such as family members, of course, they are going to get sad and they are going to feel emptiness in their hearts. Sometimes people can't cope with the fact that they are gone and they usually need help to get over it. Most of the time, people need someone to talk to and even sometimes people feel that they need someone to fill that spot in their hearts and that is usually where people need the feeling of love from someone, such as a boyfriend or girlfriend. A lot of people are just the type of person to just want to be with someone for the wrong reasons, such as a physical relationship or they just want to be with someone for a short period of time. From that, you know that it isn't really love, but just lust. People feel that in their lives, they need someone to actually be called theirs, or someone to just feel safe with and talk to, but since they want it so bad, they look for someone for the wrong reasons.
In my life, I have a lot of people that love me and I have people who are physically and mentally there for me. I don't know what I would do without the people. Personally, when I was in Kindergarten, I started to have little crushes on the opposite sex. I knew that I would start to like boys because I was very attracted to them and they just stood out to me. Once I got older and matured, I still felt the same way with boys except I started to get involved with them. I learned that feelings and emotions are very much real and if you love someone truly and deeply, that you will never want to let them go, and that they are your everything. You feel such a great feeling that you cannot describe in words. There is just not a perfect way to describe the feeling of being loved. I think that love is such a beautiful thing that no one should take advantage of. When people say I love you, it is such a moving thing to hear filled with such mixed motions.
The first time someone told me that they loved me, I was petrified of it but I was so happy and I just, I was lost of words. I wasn't able to think, I didn't know what to do and I didn't know what I felt, I was so confused and astonished. I was so afraid when he told me he loved me because I wasn't sure that he really loved me and I just wasn't sure if I was ready to be loved. I was afraid of the commitment that I would have to make and I was afraid that I was getting in too deep. I thought that if I didn't say I loved him that he would just go away, like how I wanted him to, but he still didn't. He stuck with me for as long as I needed him to, and he never left my side. After everything, I knew exactly how I felt and I told him that I loved him too and I knew that I really did mean it. After I told him I loved him, I knew that this love was so true. People say that it is better to not be in a relationship with someone, but other times, I don't think so. I feel that having someone that is always there for you is something great. Whenever I feel down, he is the only person I think of, the only person I want to be able to talk to, the only person who can actually help me. I know that he will just be there to be able to listen to me, and not judge for my actions, but just love me for me. Some people just don't know how lucky they are to have someone to love them, because some people in the world don't know what it feels to be loved, they don't know how to or what to love. It's not just something you can say, but something you can feel. Love is genuinely precious, and no one and nothing can tell you differently if you know you love someone.
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