Wednesday, April 9, 2008

sonnet(:

I love you from the bottom of my heart,
I'm so glad to know that you are all mine.
Praying that we will never be apart,
You respect me, never crossing the line.

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You're always on my thoughts and my mind,
Through all my troubles you understand.
We are true love that lots of people can't find,
You don't judge me, but there to hold my hand.

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When i see you, my heart begins to race,
When you love someone so deep down inside.
You always put a smile on my face,
It seems like there's nothing you could hide.

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Hoping you'll never walk out of my life,
Waiting for the day you call me your wife.

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Analysis

First of all, my topic that I chose to do my sonnet on was love. Love is a very strong word that is an intense feeling of tender affection and compassion for one another. I know that love is a very common thing to write about in poems or sonnets because that is a way to express your feelings or your thoughts, but I still chose to write about it. The reason I wrote about love was because I think that anyone who reads my sonnet can somehow relate to it. Even if people don't have significant others to spend their life with, they still have people in their lives who love them, whether it's their parents or their friends or family. Everyone at some point in their lives know that they love someone and know that that feelings they have is indescribable, that no one could ever replace them ever, and they know that they are going to love them for the rest of their lives. It doesn't matter how old you are to be able to get that feeling, because it can start at any age in life.
Sometimes when people lose their loved ones such as family members, of course, they are going to get sad and they are going to feel emptiness in their hearts. Sometimes people can't cope with the fact that they are gone and they usually need help to get over it. Most of the time, people need someone to talk to and even sometimes people feel that they need someone to fill that spot in their hearts and that is usually where people need the feeling of love from someone, such as a boyfriend or girlfriend. A lot of people are just the type of person to just want to be with someone for the wrong reasons, such as a physical relationship or they just want to be with someone for a short period of time. From that, you know that it isn't really love, but just lust. People feel that in their lives, they need someone to actually be called theirs, or someone to just feel safe with and talk to, but since they want it so bad, they look for someone for the wrong reasons.
In my life, I have a lot of people that love me and I have people who are physically and mentally there for me. I don't know what I would do without the people. Personally, when I was in Kindergarten, I started to have little crushes on the opposite sex. I knew that I would start to like boys because I was very attracted to them and they just stood out to me. Once I got older and matured, I still felt the same way with boys except I started to get involved with them. I learned that feelings and emotions are very much real and if you love someone truly and deeply, that you will never want to let them go, and that they are your everything. You feel such a great feeling that you cannot describe in words. There is just not a perfect way to describe the feeling of being loved. I think that love is such a beautiful thing that no one should take advantage of. When people say I love you, it is such a moving thing to hear filled with such mixed motions.
The first time someone told me that they loved me, I was petrified of it but I was so happy and I just, I was lost of words. I wasn't able to think, I didn't know what to do and I didn't know what I felt, I was so confused and astonished. I was so afraid when he told me he loved me because I wasn't sure that he really loved me and I just wasn't sure if I was ready to be loved. I was afraid of the commitment that I would have to make and I was afraid that I was getting in too deep. I thought that if I didn't say I loved him that he would just go away, like how I wanted him to, but he still didn't. He stuck with me for as long as I needed him to, and he never left my side. After everything, I knew exactly how I felt and I told him that I loved him too and I knew that I really did mean it. After I told him I loved him, I knew that this love was so true. People say that it is better to not be in a relationship with someone, but other times, I don't think so. I feel that having someone that is always there for you is something great. Whenever I feel down, he is the only person I think of, the only person I want to be able to talk to, the only person who can actually help me. I know that he will just be there to be able to listen to me, and not judge for my actions, but just love me for me. Some people just don't know how lucky they are to have someone to love them, because some people in the world don't know what it feels to be loved, they don't know how to or what to love. It's not just something you can say, but something you can feel. Love is genuinely precious, and no one and nothing can tell you differently if you know you love someone.



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